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Feedback Sheet Task 3: Oral Presentation

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Language and Style 1 £ £ £

(e.g. choice of words and expressions, 2 £ £ £

degree of formality) 3 £ £ £

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Visual Aids 1 £ £ £

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*Feedback given by

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* This feedback sheet can be used for self-, peer and/or teacher assessment. The person who provides the feedback may put his/her name down if necessary.

Teacher’s Notes

Task 1: A Mini Guide to a Country in Asia

Part A : Preparing the content of a mini guide

1. Before the lesson, ask students to collect travel information about Asian countries from various sources (e.g. brochures, magazines, newspapers) and bring them to the class. Ask students to brainstorm the names of Asian countries (e.g. Cambodia, China, India, Indonesia, Japan, Korea, Malaysia, Mongolia, Nepal, Pakistan, The Philippines, Singapore, Sri Lanka, Thailand, Vietnam). Encourage students to explore information about different countries.

2. During the lesson, introduce the context of the task. Talk about the "Asian Travelling Award Competition" they are going to enter. Ask students to express their opinions on a country in Asia they would like to visit.

3. Discuss with students the official requirements of the mini guide for entering the competition (p.81). Draw their attention to each detail.

4. Guide students to read Gary’s e-mail message (p.82 – p.83) and follow the suggested steps to prepare the mini guide. Ask students to search on the given websites for more information about the places of interest. Guide them to classify and organize the information collected by using a table (p.86).

5. Go through Gary’s mini guide to Greece (p.84 – p.85) and help students identify the main features and content of a guide. Get students to work in groups of four to prepare the content.

Part B : Producing a mini guide, and Part C : Designing the cover of a mini guide

1. Guide students to discuss in groups of four the details to be put in the mini guide and how they can present the information in an attractive and interesting way (e.g. using headings and subheadings, postcards and photos with captions). Encourage students to be creative when working on the overall design and arrangement of information.

2. Encourage students to describe a few aspects of the country (e.g. culture, tourist attractions).

3. Ask students to design a cover for the mini guide.

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Part D : Evaluating and revising the mini guide

1. Guide students to use the feedback sheet for producing a mini guide (p.88) to evaluate their draft mini guide and make improvements. The feedback sheet can also be used for seeking peer feedback for further improvement.

2. Teacher-student conferencing can be conducted with each group during the production process. Give feedback on the mini guide each group has produced. The feedback sheet can be used or further adapted for giving specific and constructive teacher feedback.

3. Each group revises their mini guide to improve it. Good work can be displayed to show recognition and appreciation of students’ effort.

Teacher’s Notes

Task 2: A Brief Proposal

1. Go through in class the e-mail message, the outline and the brief proposal from Gary (p.89 – p.90). Draw students’ attention to the genre as well as the purpose and theme of each paragraph.

2. Guide each group to write their brief proposal in about 200 words.

3. Each group may use the feedback sheet for writing a brief proposal (p.92 – p.93) to check and evaluate their work. Peer assessment can also be done by using the same feedback sheet. Teacher-student conferencing can be conducted with each group during the writing process.

4. Give feedback on students’ proposals. The teacher can adapt or use the feedback sheet.

5. Each group revise their proposal to further improve it. The final products can be displayed for sharing and appreciation. Follow-up activities can be designed, if necessary, for remediation or consolidation.

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Task 3: An Oral Presentation

Part A : Attending a briefing session

1. Introduce the context and guide students to understand the requirements for delivering the presentation. (The task requirements can be changed to suit students' ability. For example, the time limit of the oral presentation can be reduced to four or five minutes for weaker students.) Then ask students to complete the notes on oral presentation skills (p.94) as they listen to the talk. Explain to students that they should fill in the blanks with appropriate word or words which can represent the speaker’s ideas correctly. Play the tape again, if necessary.

2. Check the answers in class. Explain and demonstrate the presentation skills to make sure students understand how to apply them.

Teacher’s Notes

Tapescript A Briefing Session

Hello, everybody. Welcome to this briefing session. I hope you’ve already collected useful information about the country that you'd like to visit. I’m sure you’ve found the process interesting and worth your effort.

Your final task for entering the competition is to give an oral presentation. I guess I can give you some ideas here to help you.

Okay. To prepare your presentation, you need to have good and interesting information to start with. However, don’t cover every detail in your presentation. Be selective, be precise and be focused. You should use some visual aids to help you. PowerPoint slides or transparencies can help you deliver your speech. They can also help your audience to follow your points well. Pictures, films and sound effects may be added for more interest.

So, be concise. You need not cover every detail. PowerPoint slides and transparencies are useful visual aids.

Now, to begin your presentation, you should first introduce yourselves, and the topic, and give your audience an outline of your speech, that is the different parts to be covered.

Since there are at least four members in the group, you should assign jobs to different members. Remember to assign more or less the same proportion of your content to each member.

You should look confident and maintain eye contact with your audience. Your pronunciation should be clear. Your voice should be loud enough to be heard by all participants. You should deliver your speech at a moderate speed, not too fast, not too slow. Try to look calm and put on a smile. Don’t forget to have eye contact.

You should bring out the main points of your presentation by emphasizing or sometimes repeating some key words. Don’t speak in a mechanical monotone. Vary your intonation.

You should also sound involved and interested. Repeat the important points for emphasis but never use a monotone.

Before your actual delivery, you should practise and time yourself to have good control of the time. Before you end your presentation, don’t forget to thank the audience politely.

Okay, I hope all these tips can help you give a wonderful presentation and I wish you every success in your effort. Thank you for coming to this briefing session and being so attentive. Good luck to you all.

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Key to Part A : Attending a briefing session

Oral presentation skills

• Don’t cover every detail; be selective, precise and focused.

• Use visual aids such as PowerPoint slides and transparencies to help you, so that your audience can hear and follow your points easily.

• To add more interest, pictures, films and sound effects can be used.

• At the beginning, you should give an outline so that your audience can have a better understanding of the structure of your presentation.

• Assign each member more or less the same proportion of the job for a balanced division of work.

• Be confident and maintain eye contact with your audience. Look calm and smile at your audience.

• Pace yourself well; don’t speak too fast or too slowly.

• You should repeat some of the words or ideas for emphasis.

• Don’t speak in a monotone. Vary your intonation to give interest to your audience.

• To keep good control of the time, you should practise timing yourself before the presentation.

• When you finish, you should thank your audience politely.

Teacher’s Notes

Part B : Writing an outline and making preparation for producing a script, and Part C : Writing a script for an oral presentation

1. Guide students to read through the e-mail message, the presentation outline and the script (p.95 – p.97) from Gary. Let students listen to the presentation of Gary's group to give them some idea of a group presentation.

2. Ask students to read again the script given by Gary to identify the main points.

3. Ask students to draft their presentation outline on p.98.

4. Ask students to jot down the useful phrases and sentences from Gary’s script (p.97) and some excerpts from another presentation script (p.100). Give more examples and practice, if necessary, to prepare students to write their own scripts.

5. Guide students to draft their presentation scripts in groups.

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Tapescript Presentation of Gary's Group

Gary: Good morning, everyone. We’re from Ming Wah Secondary School. Today, we’re going to talk about an ancient country, Greece, which we would like to visit. There are three main points in our presentation. First, we’ll give you some general information about Greece. Then, about its culture. Finally, we’ll talk about some of the tourist attractions there.

Lily: First of all, we’d like to introduce some general information about Greece. Greece is situated in southern Europe and its capital city is Athens. It’s wet and warm in spring, dry and hot in summer, dry and cool in autumn, and wet and mild in winter. The major religion in Greece is Greek Orthodox. The people there speak Greek. The currency they use nowadays is the Euro, as Greece is a member of the European Union, but they used to have the Drachma before 2002. Now I hope you have some basic ideas about the country.

Simon: Secondly, what attracts us most is the Greek culture. The Greeks have many celebrations throughout the year. The Carnival Season is celebrated in February and March with feasting and traditional dancing. From June to September, it’s the Athens Festival. There are drama and music performances in ancient theatres. The Greek cuisine also plays a very important part in the Greek culture. Meat kebab, spinach and cheese pie, and Greek salad are very popular dishes. The Greeks like to drink chilled Greek coffee and Ouzo, which is a type of wine often drunk with water. Watch out, it’s quite strong.

Carman: Apart from its culture, Greece has a lot of tourist attractions. In Athens, there are many ancient sites. The Acropolis is one of them. It’s an ancient temple with statues and monuments. The Ancient Theatre of Dionysos is situated at the foot of the Acropolis.

Some of the programmes of the Athens Festival are performed there. For shopping, Agora, which is a marketplace, is very famous for selling souvenirs. In addition to the ancient sites and the marketplace, the Greek islands in the Aegean Sea are also worth visiting. Santorini and Mykonos are famous for their nice sandy beaches.

Gary: In conclusion, Greece is a country which is worth visiting. If we can visit Greece, we’ll know more about this ancient country, the interesting places there, its culture and how modern Greeks live nowadays as compared to their ancestors. Thank you.

Teacher’s Notes

Names of Places

Acropolis / ’kr p lIs/ Dionysos /daI naIs s/

Aegean /I’ i: n/ Mykonos /’mi:k nos/

Agora /’ g r / Santorini /s nt ri:ni:/

Key to Part B

Notepad: Script of the presentation given by Gary

Introduction

How to introduce ourselves:

“We’re from Ming Wah Secondary School.”

How to introduce the topic:

“Today, we’re going to talk about an ancient country, Greece, which we would like to visit."

How to introduce the main points:

“There are three main points in our presentation. First, … Then, … Finally, …”

Body

How to introduce the first main point:

“First of all, we’d like to introduce some general information about Greece.”

How to introduce the second main point:

“Secondly, what attracts us most is the Greek culture.”

How to introduce the third main point:

“Apart from its culture, Greece has a lot of tourist attractions.”

Conclusion

How to give an explicit conclusion:

“In conclusion, Greece is a country which is worth visiting.”

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Key to Part B

Notepad: Excerpts from another presentation script

Introduction

How to introduce ourselves:

“We’re S.4 students from North Point School.”

How to introduce the topic:

“We’d like to introduce Egypt to you.”

How to introduce the main points:

“Firstly, we’ll cover some general information about Egypt. Secondly, its ancient culture. Lastly, its historic relics.”

Body

How to introduce the first main point:

“To begin with, we’ll give you some information about Egypt.”

How to introduce the second main point:

“Next, the Egyptian culture.”

How to introduce the third main point:

“In addition to its culture, Egypt has many historic relics.”

Conclusion

How to give an explicit conclusion:

“To summarize, we can learn more about this ancient civilization, the Islamic culture …”

Teacher’s Notes

Part D : Preparing cue cards

1. Go through Gary’s cue cards (p.103 – p.105) and draw students’ attention to the main features. Explain and demonstrate how to use the cards to deliver a presentation.

2. Guide students to develop their cue cards from the outline (p.98) and the script (p.102) they have prepared.

Part E : Delivering an oral presentation in class

1. Revisit the presentation skills covered in Part A and the use of cue cards in Part D.

2. Teach students how to achieve smooth transitions between speakers. Introduce in class some useful expressions, if necessary.

e.g. ‘I’ve introduced the general information about Greece. My partner, John, will talk about some interesting places there.’

3. Allow some time for students to prepare visual aids and rehearse their presentation. The recording of the presentation of Gary's group in Part B can be used again to illustrate relevant speaking skills. Give advice where appropriate. Encourage students to do self-assessment by reflecting on their own performance each time during their practice and rehearsal and then to try to make improvements.

4. Each group then delivers their oral presentation in front of the class.

5. When acting as the audience while other groups are presenting, students may fill in the feedback sheet for delivering an oral presentation (p.107 – p.108) to evaluate their peers' performance. The items on the feedback sheet should be well explained and illustrated with examples beforehand. Introduce some phrases and sentences to help them write their comments or feelings about the presentations, e.g. 'interesting content', 'good/weak pronunciation' and 'clear/unclear voice'.

6. To make the task more meaningful for students who are more able, ask them to use the note sheet on p.120 to jot down some interesting or useful information about other countries while listening to other groups' presentations. Exercise discretion to decide whether this task is suitable for your students.

7. Give oral feedback on the presentations. The feedback sheet can be used or adapted for giving teacher feedback.

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