ENGLISH SM B.6 U.9
LEAVING HOME
TO A/AN/THE _____ LEAVING _____
•Mother’s love
Subject
•The daughter was going to start a new phase.
Occasion
•All the mothers whose daughter is leaving.
Audience
•To express her _____ feelings for her daughter’s departure.
Purpose
•The mother
Speaker
•Soft and tender
Tone
Example 1:
To a Student Leaving a Math Teacher
When I saw you at 16 to study math, asking
around beside you as you taught in front of a big
blackboard, my own mouth rounding in surprise when you answered the difficult question of the homework, I kept thinking for the contents of your teaching as I
started to deal with the question, while I became older, more clear about math, cheering, cheering for my scores, screaming with laughter, the smile beaming behind you like a moon
shining goodbye.
Example 2: To a Teacher Leaving School
When you told me at 18 to write
an article, walking around beside me
as I fell asleep on the cozy chair,
my own mouth watering in shock when you punched
strongly on top of my head, you kept murmuring
for the snoring
of my nap as I
continued to nod off, while you grew
older, more vulnerable with disease,
deteriorating, deteriorating for your body, suffering
with pain, the hair falling from you like the
silk tearing
apart.
To My Students Leaving School Carolyn
When I first met you in the very same classroom, where you now enjoy the naps and mobile games, looking at your young and lively faces,
laughing at your hilarious jokes, I couldn’t but like you
immediately,
for your innocent souls,
your flattering comments, and those sparkling eyes eager for knowledge, ambitious for your future,
while you grew maturer, more sophisticated,
having yielded to reality, laughing, playing, sleeping, fooling, idling, joking,
manifesting the overwhelming power of time,
stretching with a yawn like an indifferent gesture
saying goodbye.
To a Dog Leaving for My Home
宇暄When I saw you at once arriving my home, lying in a paper box,
my mouth rounding in surprise when you looked at me,
I couldn’t help but touch you.
When you grew bigger, more active pumping, pumping for your life, barking with joy,
the fur flapping on you
like a blanket saying hello.
To the Students Leaving School
The students have left the old time of
taking naps in the classroom, playing cards around the back,
cheating on the test,
making teachers’ temper crack, shouting the name of “Jack,”
all the times, good or bad,
having become the past.
To a Kid Leaving Home
語喬The bird has grown up, wings completely strong,
So she stands up, shaking her white feathers, trying to escape from
the cave named “home.”
“Don’t stop her. It’s her life,”
my heart says to me.
I keep silent, standing still and watching her flapping away.
“It’s her life,” I murmur,
wondering if she comes back someday, what colors will dye on her pure white.
To the Caterpillar Not Leaving Its Cocoon
施瑋 If only, If only, the caterpillar sighs, If only I can soar high up in the sky,
The sun would be bright, I can tell
If only I have the courage to leave this shell.
Would it be safe, where else can I stay?
I mustn’t leave, oh no, not today.
There is not much inside, inside the dome, yet it’s an ideal place for a comfort zone.
Oh butterfly, I wonder how you fly so free, Oh butterfly, I wish like that I could be,
soaring above the wonderland, so awesome, so grand,
able to fly so high up in the sky.
How great it would be just to live alive!
To My Best Friends Leaving Each Other
李恩
Time flies. It’s time for us to say goodbye.
Thank God for letting me meet you guys.
The time we stayed together like a lifespan of a fly.
All the happiness and sadness we underwent I’d put inside.
It’s invaluable that money can’t buy.
I’ll give it a try,
not to hide in bed and cry.
We have seen lots of beautiful scenery through our eye.
Oh my!
Eric’s blood pressure went so high.
Though we’re gonna say goodbye, our friendship will never die.
李恩想對朋友說
Really, all of you play a crucial role in my life.
Distance won’t separate the missing of our guys.
Separation is a bit sorrowful but not disappointing;
a bit regretful but not pessimistic, because
the chance we meet each other in the future is comforting us.
To Birds Leaving to Fly
陳瑄Clouds twirling in the beautiful blue sky, my heart ached of wanting to fly,
with wobbly legs, I took a deep breath,
jumping into the breeze, wings stretched out to glide.
Tumbling in the roaring winds, I was lost and panic-stricken, falling, falling into darkness. My mother’s words
came to me, believe in yourself and don’t give up!
Flapping hard with all my might, spiraling up to touch the
stars and feel the warmth of sunlight.
To Us Leaving Each Other Jack
Months ago we met Times in a row we sat
talking about the edge of time passing so fast High school life goes to an end
Right this moment, here we stand seeing each other with a helpless face
Giving each other one last gaze
With memories of our glad days running through my brain I wish I have the strength to wait until seeing you again
It’s the season of graduation, but not a reason for our desperation.
To Polaris Leaving Eclipse
昀楷Difference occurred in the wind
smashing peace, breaking credence.
One tried hard to indicate standpoints,
and the other one just looked up to the sky, crying without tears.
After the long embarrassing standing,
she broke the silence with a hoarse voice,
“whatever it takes.”
The freezing atmosphere finally crumbled, banging painfully on his heart.
Two fragmented hearts search for a way to one ideal future,
where the mutants are truly free.
To Warriors Leaving the Stage Ivy
Hey yo! Back up a little!
Here comes the talent show!
National Experimental High School The last time we performed
with new blood—Bing Yo!
My old partner—Nathalia Ho!
Oh, I forgot…
The mighty warrior—Yo Yo!
Dance teaches us to be humble
Dance teaches Andy not to drink the alcohol Dance gives the rally hard to hold
Oh, finally the day comes, we spoke
It was difficult But we did it all
With my mask thrown
And one of the shoes fallen
Never ending is our dancing soul!
To a Friend Leaving Town
祉頤We’ve known each other when we were young, Did stupid things that got us caught,
Imagined flying as you pushed my swung,
Laughed heartily like there were no one else.
Shared sandwiches together and made promises to stay forever.
Then, the leaves turned yellow, the flowers withered, The train whistled twice, saying it’s time to go,
I waved goodbye to you and you did so.
To a Leaf Leaving the Tree
亮惟When I saw you at nine,
you were just a bud, green and small.
With one day and one day,
you became stronger and greener.
After three months, you grew up to a leaf, big and dark green,
swaying in the wind and rustling in the air.
After another three months, you turned into yellow.
After another three months, you turned to brown.
When I was ten, one day, you were blown away by winds. Finally, you left the tree
and wobbled in the air until lying on the ground. Goodbye, my leaf.
To a Bird Leaving the World
照翔My first glimpse at you unexpectedly Your chirp used to be that energetic Your wings used to flap that mightily
Every time I opened the door you cuddled up to me
confiding your secret
Wish you have a good dream
You will always be in my heart
To a Warrior Leaving the World
煜清With the rhythm echoing in the sky,
your words are still haunting in my mind.
The day we met seemed just like yesterday.
Everything we’ve undergone I still remember, the frog we stoned together.
the horse liver couldn’t be tastier.
the girl you liked and how I helped you chase her.
Now you’re on your way to finish your accomplishment.
Let the wind escort you to the empire, and let the river be your pioneer.
I’ll long stand here for your return,
until you bring back the honor you deserve.
To a Legend Leaving the Court
亞輔When I saw you at twelve on the screen, screaming and crazy about you
as you dribbled beside the three-point line,
my own mouth rounding in nervousness when you beat the buzzer and won the series,
I kept following you for the amazing fadeaway jumper, while you disappear gradually in the spotlight,
less vigorous with age, as time went by,
I’ll never forget the green blood bleeding down your body, the night you beat Kobe’s Lakers,
your story will be etched in history,
‘cause you are “THE TRUTH,”
the Boston hero—Paul Pierce.
To Us Leaving Senior High School Life
Suddenly, we are about to graduate from school.
喬瑋Time waits for no man.
It goes fast
so I can’t seize it.
Tik-Tok Tik-Tok Tik-Tok
The sound of Tik-Tok alarms me our senior high life is about to end Now what I can do is cherish every moment left
with my classmate.
To the Diver Leaving the World
You woke up again but ready to be gone with hands toward the sky
you dove
into the abyssal blue
Hands sliced through the surface Darkness devoured you
no resistance no struggle
while keeping falling down
down
down
To a Comet Leaving Its Orbit
子普Shining, burning the rest of life,
In the silent night, you attracted my sight.
“Rage, rage against the dying of the light,”
A poet sighed.
Shining, burning the rest of life,
In the sky, you’ve left your light in my mind,
Leaving me on the earth missing how bright.
To a Pure Boy Leaving Me
易劭He was a pure boy,
who joyfully ate a sweet pastry,
but, now, he no longer feels happy easily.
He was a pure boy,
who smiled with the sunshine when play Monopoly,
but, now, he cries with the moonlight for confronting difficulty.
He was a pure boy,
who expressed the affection unreservedly,
but, now, he is too cowardly to give his lover everything.
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He was a pure boy,
who ran after the inaccessible dream,
but, now, he is studying the unreasonable chemical thoery.
He was a pure boy,
who used to exchange the diary,
but, now, he is phubbing his phone lonely.
He was a pure boy,
who existed previously,
but, now, he is just living in his mind deeply.
To a Soul Leaving Hell
品儀Child
You’ve been here a while
Now you’ve finished the trial It’s time you can show
Your relaxing smile Remember the lesson
And put down the weapon You’re going to heaven
Where you’re always forgiven
After you’re gone
I’ll be left lonesome
When I finish the rum
The next soul will come
To a Rocket Leaving the Earth
育誠When you built me in delight to launch
the wind, chattering along beside me
with me emitted away on four gigantic ejectors my own frame rustling in surprise when I took off above the straight horizons of the earth, you kept squinting for the radiance
of my tail as I
accelerated to move on while the earth grew
smaller, more changeable with distance,
soaring, soaring,
for my adventure, booming with laughter,
the vapor chasing behind me like a
tear streak representing goodbye.
To Shelly Before Leaving for College
恩緜
I’ve known you for a long time, since we were like ten.
We were such good friends,
though you always ruined my plan.
We played on the ground wildly, till our shirts were full of stains.
We have pranked all our classmates.
Oh, they were really good days then.
But we both understand
that we are both going somewhere new.
You may feel cold and stranded
when I won’t be there when you need me.
However, there’s nothing to be afraid, for you’re gonna have a good life
there with your new friends.
Leaving will never be the end;
it’s just another beginning.
So stay strong, be bold,
and everything will be fine.
To Someone Leaving Happiness
I fell into a dream, 浚右
meandering around.
I stared at the moonlight,
trying to open the dream behind.
Therein lay a splendorous world,
with leaves rustling and flowers waving.
You once told me love is unlimited, but how could I be gnawed?
I clutched at your hand,
thinking the love had come to an end.
Tender was the night.
How could I survive?
Abruptly struck awake from the dream, I trembled.
Slowly basked in your fugacious love, I struggled.
Occasionally hearing your obsolete anecdote, I quibbled.
Inchingly subsiding was the darkness.
Gradually emerging was my boldness.
Surely existing was your kindness.
Tender was till the night.
Don’t need to turn on the light.