Question-based Group
No error
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1. …I study (started) hard.
2. Finally I realize (realized) my dream.
3. … when the semester starts (started), the scenery goes (went) into my eyes is (was) just only men.
2. I become more careful when I was (am) in the bathroom…
3. …just like in the area which was (is) filled with landmines. be going to play tennis, suddenly, it rains.
3. it must make me feel disappointed.
1. …what has been affecting us the most in common is a day of bad weather. (o)
2. For example, when I finished my homework and went to exercise.
Suddenly, it rain (rained). (o) (x)
3. It must have made me feel disappointed. (o) 3
4. …I know many music celebrities in the world and what they done (have done).
3. When I finish reading the letter…
4. …I can’t feel anything.
z 「我寫太快了」(6：粗心) z 「嗚嗚，好多錯！」(7：當時直
覺就寫成這樣) 1. No TS 1. TS: Rain, however, is normally regarded as an omen of bad luck.
It is related to your mind, feelings, and influence of lie, such as traffic jam, drowned rat, to mane just a few. (o)
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us, we can…
2. After we overcame it, we will never…
1. Even though the adversities have been perplexing us, we can … (o)
2. After we overcome it, we will never… (o) 6
3. Studying in Hsinchu senior high school, I can met (have met) so many new friends. (x)
1. The bad weather will affect my mood, but other people may think it is terrific.
1. The bad weather always affect (affects) my mood, but other people may think it is terrific. (o)
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2. No TS
3. … our homeroom teacher took us to a special place where some people is (were) taking care of “vegetables.”
z 「恩，對習慣性的經驗的用法需 多注意」(1：一時想不出來該如 何用)
they still face (faced) the reality hopefully!
1. A day of bad weather… but also can means a sunny or windy day.
2. Somebody may thought that the sunny day is great for him...
1. A day of bad weather… but also can be a sunny or windy day. (o) 2. Somebody may think that the sunny day is great for him… (o) 9
3. It can date back to 1999 when there is (was) a much more important experience that affects me a lot.
4. … a big earthquake strike (stroke) me!
10. Having forgot how long it have past (had passed), I keep (kept) my room bright…
z 「阿！對吼！」(1.2：直覺反應 之下寫出來的)
1. When the computer class’ ring rings, it means my nightmare has came, but when I saw the questions it seemed not so difficult for me.
2. Then I passed the exam, so the most important thing for me is how to pass the English test…
3. … even though I have studied it very hard.
1. When the computer class’ ring rang, it means (meant) my
nightmare is (was) coming, but when I saw the questions it seemed not so difficult for me. (o) (x) (x)
2. Then I passed the exam, so the most important thing for me later was how to pass the English test… (o)
3. …even though I studied (had studied) it very hard. (x) 10
4. No TS
5. … but he couldn’t swim, neither does (did) I.
6. Finally the helper came and rescue (rescued) my brother.
7. Since that my brother and I had make (have made) up our mind to learn how to swim.
8. Because of this experience, it had made (has made) me get a lot of metals in many swimming competitions.
z 「該注意時態的！」(1：一時腦
2. It was still sunny when we start our journey.
3. As we arrived the place, we’re all shocked.
4. We hide in the tent and nothing we can do. But luckily, one of my friend brought cards with him so that we can play during in the tent.
3. As we arrived at the place, we were all shocked. (o)
4. We hid in the tent and nothing we can (could) do. But luckily, one of my friend bought cards with him so that we could play during in the tent. (o) (x) (o)
5. It was (is) the boldest thing that I’ve ever done.
6. I was about 10 and I have (had) a relative…
7. But the question is (was) that my parents have (had) work to do…
8. Therefore, I can (could) only try to get to America by myself.
9. … when I carried a large package and get (got) through the customs, I saw…
10. Everything seems (seemed) so unfamiliar that I fall (fell) in a sense of scare.
11. Fortunately, the flight attendants can (could) speak Chinese, so I can (could) ask her for whatever I need (needed).
記如何運用正確的句子」(1：當
2. I think bad weather isn’t bad after that event.
6. … I should not sign my name without understanding what data is (was) about.
is a day of bad weather!” weather!” (o)
7. I couldn’t believe it because I love (loved) robots, not bricks.
8. So I thank my father a lot because he change (changed) the gift from robots to LEGO.
2. Because it was raining, Dad and I can have been gone (couldn’t go) fishing. (o)(x)
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3. No TS
4. We are (were) talking happily.
5. Other people help (helped) the patients.
6. And the ambulance is (was) coming.
1. The ground became wet after raining. 1. The ground becomes wet after raining. (o) 18
2. The girl who I love (loved) betray (betrayed) me.
3. She is (was) my girlfriend.
4. But in fact, she is (was) another boy’s girlfriend.
5. It includes (included) sadness and disappointments.
z 「恩，這裡應該用現在簡單式才
my family members.
1. I decided to join the guitar club which I like (liked) before.
這位同學是第一次寫作，自言很容
3. There are (were) so many things to be careful about that I couldn’t convey may opinion very clearly.
這位同學用日記的方式撰寫，發現
then play (played) basketball with them.
4. … because the time when I play (played) with them is an experience that affects me a lot..
No error school, then I went to classroom. I found that I haven’t do the home work.
1. I once went to school when it was raining. (o)
2. I only could pay money to driver. When I went to school, I met many cars so I was late for school. Then when I went to classroom I found that I hadn’t done the homework. (o)(o)
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2. Suddenly, a strange feeling pass (passed) from the floor and soon through my body.
3. Then, the train lash (lashed) down in a hurry.
4. I can’t (couldn’t) understand how he could have such…
5. … and why he choose (chose) such a terrible way to end his life.
z TS：下午第一節課寫作真的很不 容易集中精神好好寫。
30 1. I think that people will feel bad because of they see the weather is dark…
2. You will see that weather is dark in the morning.
3. Then, you walk to school alone.
4. On the way to school you will see people very strange.
5. Because everyone has a pair of cold eyes.
These cold eyes will make very sad and
1. I think that people feel sad because they see the weather is dark…
(o)
2. You may have seen that the weather is (was) dark in the morning.
(o)(x)
3. Then, you walked to school alone. (o)
4. On the way to school you saw people wear a very strange face. (o) 5. Because everyone had a pair of indifferent eyes, those indifferent
eyes made you very sad and terrible. (o)(o)
z 「想知道為何被改」(1：我是站
6. Then, I didn’t know what’s (was) wrong.
3. Therefore, I suggest going to my home to play table tennis.
4. …when I remembered the happening, I still laugh.
1. TS: A day of bad weather reminds me of one of my best friend who experienced something tragic in a rainy day. (o)
2. …it became rainy. (o)
3. Therefore, I suggested going to my home to play table tennis. (o) 4. …whenever I remember this event, I still laugh. (o)
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No error
z 「下次記得」(2：一時忘記)
1. No TS
2. There is become summer slowly, and the weather becomes hot more than more.
3. In the afternoon, I have eaten my lunch.
2. Summer is coming slowly, and the weather becomes hotter and hotter. (o)
3. This afternoon, I finished my lunch. (o)
4. The weather was so hot that I didn’t like to move. (o)(o) 5. Something flied around me; I felt very bored because I was
writing it. (o)(o)(o)
13. As soon as my hand touched them, I find (found) a terrible thing.
14. I jump (jumped) out quickly…
15. There is (was) a big opening on my leg.
16. I press (pressed) on the wound at once and go (went) back home.
17. My parents also feel (felt) very frightened.
18. We go (went) to hospital.
would like to do.
2. …taught me a great deal of important things which makes (made) me determined to be the shortest but best player in my country.
3. For example, when I want (wanted) to shoot, the enemies always block (blocked) me easily…
態可能真的怪怪的」(1：我希望 的後面應該是接未來式)
1. If today is sunny day that I can play basketball with my friend.
2. If today is sunny day that I can go shopping with my friend.
3. If today is sunny day that I can go out with my friend.
1. If it were sunny today, I could play basketball with my friend.
(o)(o)
2. If today were sunny, I could go shopping with my friend. (o)(o) 3. If today were sunny day I could go out with my friend. (o)(o)
2. During the time, I feel comfortable.
Because I can understand something I want to realize.
3. Although I can realize something, sometimes I will annoy.
4. If it is rain, I will feel sad.
5. That seems I don’t be affected by weather. But I still often be affected by weather.
1. TS (o)
2. During the time, I felt comfortable. Because I could understand something I wanted to realize. (o)(o)(o)
3. Although I could realize something unknown, something I felt annoyed. (o)(o)
4. If it rains, I will feel sad. (o)
5. Change into: The weather may affect me. But I think the greatest influence is my mood. (o) 2. I neither bring umbrella with us.
3. The only choice be we have is to go home.
4. I were also unhappy because we originally to buy a new game of rare.
1. My mood is always influenced in a bad weather. (o)
2. But neither my friend nor I brought an umbrella with us. (o) 3. The only choice we have (had) was to go home. (x)(o)
4. I were unhappy because we originally planned to buy a new game of rare. (o)
2. I couldn’t go out to play basketball… everyone think this is terrible things.
2. I want to go out with my friends or family, not stay at home or go to school study all day, I excited the sun will appeal.
1. If the rain doesn’t stop today, it will be terrible. Everyone will think this is terrible…. (o)(o)
2. I want to go out with my friends or family, not to stay at home or study all day. I will feel excited if the sun appears. (o)(o)
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3. My mom tell (told) me I was growing up.
4. I was so happy and enjoy (enjoyed) this feeling.
5. I always like to (used to) play computer games.
6. This is (was) bad for my class, so I study (studied) harder than before.
1. It’s rains! Today is a bad weather means a boring day, too.
1. It’s raining! Today is a day of bad weather, which means a boring day, too. (o)
7. The principal found me and talk (talked) about many conceptions… 1. The heavy rain raining as if the angels’
tears.
1. The heavy rain is raining as the angels’ tears. (o) 40
2. No TS
3. Anyway, she was so charming for me that I can’t (couldn’t) help but stop my eyes on her.
z 「加了動詞，感覺更有 fu」(1：
靈光乍現寫出來的，當時覺得很 有 fu 阿)