英詩翻譯練習—請掌握「信、達、雅」原則 班級: 座號: 姓名: 組別:
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You say that you love rain, but you open your umbrella when it rains.
You say that you love the sun, but you find a shadow spot when the sun shines.
You say that you love the wind, but you close your windows when wind blows.
This is why I am afraid, you say that you love me too.
正常版
你說你喜歡雨，雨落時，你卻撐起了傘；你說你喜歡陽光，陽光照耀時，你卻躲在了陰影里；你說你喜歡風，
風起時，你卻掩起了窗扉。這就是我為何恐懼，我怕你說愛我，卻逃不脫相似的結局。
晉級版
你說，愛雨的纏綿，卻只在傘下遙望；你說，愛陽光熱烈，卻總在樹蔭里清涼；你說，愛風的瀟洒，卻只在 窗內傾聽；你說愛我，如雨，如日或如風？
文藝版
你說煙雨微茫，蘭亭遠望；後來輕攬婆娑，深遮霓裳。你說春光爛漫，綠袖紅香，後來內掩西樓，靜立卿旁；
你說軟風輕浮，醉卧思量；後來緊掩門窗，漫帳成殤。你說青絲柔長，如何相忘。我卻眼波微轉，兀自成霜。
漂鳥集詩句練習
1、Every child comes with the message that God is not yet discouraged of man.(漂鳥集 77) (沮喪、洩氣、失望、沒信心…)
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2、Not hammer-strokes , but dance of the water sings the pebbles perfection.(漂鳥集 126) (錘子) (擊、敲、打…) (小圓石，小鵝卵石)
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3、The woodcutter’s axe begged for its handle from the tree. the tree gave it .(漂鳥集 71) (懇求、乞討…) (柄、把手…)
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4、" Who is there to take up my duties ? " asked the setting sun .
" I shall do what I can , my Master , " said the earthen lamp . (漂鳥集 153) (瓦燈，陶土做的燈)
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5、My heart beats her waves at the shore of the world and writes upon it her signature in tears with the words , " I love thee. “ (漂鳥集 26) (簽字、簽署)
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